Friday, October 31, 2014

Happy Halloween 3



                           Happy Halloween 3
                                By Devon Bates
          It’s the final chapter in this chapter we will found out what It is, who keeps leaving these notes, what will happen to James, and if anyone likes the word tutum. Since I liked doing this so much I might start doing more of them. Let’s head to part three MWAHAHAHAHA!
          James opened the door to the hallway slowly more careful than ever before. The map seemed to lead through the kitchen he kept a look out for more pages on the way. On the back of the map was another note from ?.  Don’t mess with anything that wiggles, moves, floats, or anything else around moving in the kitchen.” James started through the kitchen and saw a note he head toward it to find that it didn’t say tutum instead it said “James, turn around and head for the door now it will be your only hope.” James then thought “Why am I listening to these notes its crazy. One wants me to go out the door and the other deeper into the mansion. I think I trust the one to leave.” James turned and head for the entryway.  He got there and on the couch he was sleeping on before was a note it read “James (tutum) I’m sorry that I didn’t explain why you need to go deeper in the mansion and a better reason to listen to me. I’m your father (I am NOT COPYING Star Wars in any way and am not trying to so shush now I have to go back to when I wrote that and fix it) I’m your father’s brother and your long lost uncle Dave.  Trust me please” “WHAT” “I don’t understand this I’m leaving and that’s that bye creepy mansion,” James… yelled. (JAAAMMMEEESSS (VERY ANGRY) WHY)
Then he heard a high screech and a lot of banging noises. Out of the direction the kitchen was came 5 faceless men in servant uniforms. They picked up James before he could move and carried him upstairs.
When up there they took James through a door and into a bedroom in the bed was a giant worm-like thing, it was green and black and had big fangs out of its mouth. It started to talk which made James even more speechless. “James James James I warned you and gave you a chance I really did.  Now unfortunately you must be punished,” said Uncle Dave the worm. James Then screamed his last scream as he was turned faceless and his limbs eaten and replaced.
Well not what I expected to have happen at first, but if I went with my original plan it would have been huge. My favorite part was part one what was yours. Next time will be WAY better, one it won’t be horror and I’ll start earlier than the week of Halloween. Bye and be safe this Halloween oh and watch out for Uncle Dave.
Next story genre: probably fantasy and watch out for next holiday special. (Thanksgiving won’t be there it’s too hard to think of story for that)
           

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